Rate this poem please :)?

this was part of a song/poem i wrote one day just fooling around with my guitar, was wondering if u guys could rate it and drop a comment, thanks.

I閳ユ獡 just boy, lost in my world//

And it閳ユ獨 not the way I dreamed it would be//

Cause When you left, I thought it was good//

But I閳ユ獡 all alone and one閳ユ獨 worse than two //

Can閳ユ獩 get you out of my head//

I閳ユ獡 sorry閳ヮ洅et us just take back what was said//

You take pride in making me confused//

take pride in hurting me, would you smile if I said this song was about you//

I can%26#039;t let you go because you%26#039;ve already lost me//

As this closes in, and consumes all we know//

Rate this poem please :)?

i think its really good!

Rate this poem please :)?

Hey, im not a guy, but who cares. I like it, so i gave you a star! =D.