Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

I do it because I want to feel

鈥˙ecause I can%26#039;t cry

鈥↖ don%26#039;t cry

鈥–ause the feelings

鈥╕ou know, the ones that are bottled up inside of me

鈥╓aiting and wanting to get out

鈥≒ushing, Scratching, and Thrashing

鈥═rying to break free

鈥↗ust can%26#039;t

鈥═he scarlet trail streaking down my stark white wrist鈥?br> So very pretty

鈥═he only beauty left in the world鈥?br> So very reliable

鈥═he only way I stay sane鈥?br> In a world full of angst, sorrow, and hatred

鈥≒eople making you feel like s h i t

鈥↖t makes me feel happy, beautiful, and in control

鈥↘eeping me from veering off the winding road of life鈥?br> For a moment

鈥ˋ quick sweet moment鈥?br> I won%26#039;t stop

鈥↖ can%26#039;t stop for it%26#039;s a cycle

鈥ˋ brutal, bloody one鈥?br> The one to which I%26#039;m addicted

鈥ㄢ€≒lease just rate it from 1-10, 10 being the highest and if possible give me some specific things to fix! Don%26#039;t talk about me please, as I only am asking about the poem because I need help revising it once again!! Thanks a bunch!!!

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

I%26#039;ll give it a 7, its a little depressing, but its GOOD all the same

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

1

The rhythm doesn%26#039;t flow.

It isn%26#039;t really original, I can go onto deviant art and find at least fifty poems just like it.

The vocabulary seems very limited, repetitive.

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

i for one really like it! i love reading peoms and i know what sounds good, and that is really good. it%26#039;s good, about an high 8, or low 9. :)

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

I%26#039;d rate this at a high 8. Very good for your age and I must say that it flows better than most might give credit for.

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

reminds me of my life

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

10. very good but, one error u should fix 4th line down it should be cause of the feelings. keep writing.

Rate a poem written by a 14 year old!!!???

Great Poem A Big 10 For It, %26amp; loved It